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first draft of the permanent one

this is a first draft, that needs as many tips as you can give me.
  • The permanent one

    A girl finds that only one decision in life can really stick to you forever.

    • Short Story
    • Science Fiction ยท Teen Fiction
    7 min read


There is hopeful symbolism in the fact that flags do not wave in a vacuum.
— Arthur C. Clarke