Masks
1 Part
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(Undecided) Chapter 1
(Rough draft) Adam Payne has a picture prefect future, but no one sees the true pain behind his smile
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Please Remember Me (Chapters 6-10)
This needs a lot of work. I mean a lot. Please help and be brutally honest.
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Please Remember Me (Chapters 1-5)
First five chapters to this short novel, kind of long. Please review at least a little. Be brutally honest.
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Please Remember Me (Chapters 11-15)
Chapters 11-15 of this story. Please help me, it really needs help. Be brutally honest.
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Please Remember Me (Chapters 16-20)
Next 5 chapters. Please, be brutally honest and help me. It needs a lot of work.
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Please Remember Me (Chapters 21-24)
Last few chapters. Brutally honest, please. I need a ton of help working on this story.
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Revenge
I am not a poet, in fact I sadly don't like poetry much but this needs help, it's part of one of my other stories. Last line is yikes, help please.