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I see what you mean. That isn't clear in the poem though - but, work it back in. It is a good image.

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Yes, the stanzas are uneven. I understand, in some cases, that can confuse or turn away readers, but I appreciate that you not only stuck with it, but also ultimately ...

I don't know why I post replies all the time, since you will not be notified. But I appreciate your interest, and your critique. The ending does not bridge together ...

Glad you like the poem. Beseech is perhaps stuffy, but also desperate. That's something likable to a desperate, stuffy word (or at least I feel that way). You have actually ...

Glad you like the poem. Beseech is perhaps stuffy, but also desperate. That's something likable to a desperate, stuffy word (or at least I feel that way). You have actually ...

Skye, I should first intimate how appreciative I am of your review, which somehow manages to be at once congratulatory and constructive. To its congratulations, I say thanks. To its ...

Skye, I should first intimate how appreciative I am of your review, which somehow manages to be at once congratulatory and constructive. To its congratulations, I say thanks. To its ...

This is, for all appearances, an excellent sonnet. Although I must permit some uncertainty - I am not well acquainted with the intricacies of sonnets. My only difficulty is the ...

I agree the work is rough; such is the nature of reflections. Thank you for reading, and thank you for your thoughts.

This is an exceptionally pleasant response. Thank you.

This is about a moving company. The rest is mental wandering. I will not enlighten you on any "how" of the wandering; it is what it is, understood or not. ...

If you can imagine a good horse's sigh, that's kinda how I feel about this poem. The beginning shows potential, but your criticism is astute. I'm most concerned the last ...

Thank you .

Pudgling I took license with - as in, a small, pudgy child. I think the gist is easy enough to get? I understand how you are confused by the end ...