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Thanks for the review! I actually noticed that too; I've been debating whether or not to change it to Live-er :P But anyway, thanks again!!

Hey guys! Sorry I didn't reply to your reviews earlier! Been on vacation, haha. But I know what you guys mean about the whole lack of emotion to parts of ...

Thanks for all the positive feedback! Morgan, the "silence, noisy, noisy silence" bit refers to the first few opening lines, where I describe the 'sound' leaking through the walls as ...

Wow! Thanks JaceClayton =] I'm really glad you liked it! Haha, I'm thinking I should have submitted it as my suspense piece instead... this one leaves a pretty nice emotional ...

Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews! I wrote this poem on one of those bursts of creative energy where your almost to the point of hitting something just to release ...

Haha, not creepy at all. Actually, I already kind of do that. I'm very keen on listening in and kind of 'dissecting' what people say, how they say it. But ...

Thanks for the Critique, Bad Narrator. Yeah, I know that the main characters lack of cursing wasn't characteristic, but when I asked my teacher he did say that we had ...

Thanks for the review =]. I'm glad you liked it, and I like how you described it as having a 'chant' rhythm to it. I think it's a pretty interesting ...

Thanks a bunch =] I was pretty on-the-fence about putting this up here, because I know it's a huge cliché. I know it's simple language-wise, as well. I didn't want ...

Thanks for the reviews! You guys are right- that line is awkward. I was stretching it when I wrote it, because I wasn't quite able to find something that worked ...

Wow! I didn't even realized more people had reviewed this until I looked, just now. Thank's so much for all the positive reviews! I really do want to turn this ...

Thanks so much RedSmiles! I'm glad you liked it. And you have no idea how flattered I am that you look for my stuff =D I totally get how Andy's ...

RedSmiles- I'm actually reading "The Stand" right now! It really is very good. Stephen King's not my *favorite* author, but I do like his work a lot. PenNPaper- I guess ...

I have no doubt something similar has been done before, Jenthura. However, with creative characters and situations one could make the story their own. I don't think its a Utopia, ...

Haha wow. You're going more in depth with this that I had... Let me brainstorm for a bit. The thing that keeps them from taking a pill the second they ...