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Louise Bennett Diary Entry week 1 Sunday Dear diary. My life literally sucks. For example, today, I didn’t tidy Maybe 'clean'? Not that big a deal, but you use 'Tidy' ...

I've decided to be as constructive as possible with this ;] I did it again. I had to do it again. I walked down the dirt road, my legs tingling ...

Hey there! I just wanted to say I loved it. The way you portray the way she responds to the monster really makes the reader feel the anxiety, especially towards ...

I really, really like the story. Truly, I do. It just needs more substance, more of what exactly she is thinking. As nutty above me said, her reaction to the ...

There were a few run-on sentences and grammar mistakes. It was rushed. I think you should definitely pay more attention to character devolopement and give more detail about the surroundings. ...