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Awh :) It's a fantastic tribute, and without a doubt one that reflects the feeling of every Harry Potter fan (myself included!) It truly is the end of an era, ...

I actually really like this poem! Poetry based on photos or images are always stronger, especially when you branch out like you did by drawing the image into that of ...

I have to disagree with Flower, above :) The point of repetition in a poem is to create emphasis, and I believe you did just that. Of course, without the ...

Wow. I really, really liked this. I love how you went through each point of his life, then followed through with a summary of it at the end. It made ...

I'm a bit confused on this piece, as well. The one thing that holds me back from classifying it is the fact that... well, there's not other description. The point ...

Hey there! My name is Sam, and I'll be your reviewer today. I'm going to start out with a few nitpicks, but the crux of my review will be below. ...

Hey! I'm skl, or Sam, if you like ;]. I'll be reviewing your story! First- your characters. They seem... fluid, somehow. They're clear, clean and enigmatic. A good combination for ...

In 83 years shall be the day, That all of this will burn away. Apron Upon the ground the bodies lay, Both young and old shall soon decay. The earth ...

I just wanted to say I loved this. Every once in a while during the poem I would stop and think- how many more ways can they find to say ...

First of all, just an immediate reaction, because the second I opened the box to type this reply I read the last line, and I have to say that was ...

I thought this was very charming, mistakes aside. I think Durriedog got most of the mistakes, so I'll work on flow and such. Firstly, I agree that you need to ...

In all honesty, these are just nitpicks. Nothing too drastic, because overall, the piece was fantastic! More on that at the bottom ;] It’s been seven months since the woman ...

I'd have to say, being a die-hard Austen fan, that Pride and Prejudice is better. I'm a bit biased, but... well, there's just no comparison in my eyes XD. While ...

I don't really think I can add to what other people have said... When I first started out, I was hesitant. I was thinking- "Uh-oh... this is kind of... iffy". ...

I am but the remaining pulp of a beaten, abused, abandoned, starving little girl. This house is dark and it smells of dust and dogs. The dark Maybe 'dirty'. Dark ...