skjold

hey very well written if you ask me. i didnt really find anything wrong with it except: Only the best story tellers can give their story a life of its ...

i get as in pretty much everything, except science :x

i think that it is pretty good but then again it could just be me

Damon simply refused to get cheered this sentenced should be changed hint. cheer has more than one menaing

very good

i really like your beginning the whole story line is good :)