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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Spaces in between the light

    Hi Isabelle, First off. Great job with the pace, it all simmers down into a powerful ending, and you played a nice sparring of imagination vs. reality. 1.) "I let ...

    Oct 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Cat's Calling

    Hi, 1.) "wondering if the kitten at the school gate waits for her or if it wonders off while she's trapped inside the building" --> here you may want to ...

    Oct 20, 2013


As the notifications drift in I stop and wonder. Why do they take so long? Do they have adventures we don't know about? I bet they do. When they come I will ask myself. What amazing adventure has this straggling notification been on? How far did it travel, and why didn't it take me?
— TypoWithoutCoffee