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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Spaces in between the light

    Hi Isabelle, First off. Great job with the pace, it all simmers down into a powerful ending, and you played a nice sparring of imagination vs. reality. 1.) "I let ...

    Oct 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Cat's Calling

    Hi, 1.) "wondering if the kitten at the school gate waits for her or if it wonders off while she's trapped inside the building" --> here you may want to ...

    Oct 20, 2013


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