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Re: A Perfect Dimension
This all flows so nicely, its obvious your very talented. There was only one grammer error I could find and even though we have no idea wht this about it ...
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Re: House Warming
Ok, its obvious your a good writer, a lot of potential, but you need a more original idea. Do you know how many scary stories very similiar to this one ...
Sep 13, 2009
