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Giving Nothing Back
Here is my poem after some editing. I changed quite a bit, but I'm unsure about the flow of the fourth stanza compared to the rest of the stanzas. Please ...
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The Lemon-Yellow Sun (draft 2)
The Lemon-Yellow Sun A sip of tangy-sweetness. Cold golden delight With a crisp scent that makes you Feel the sticky black asphalt, Melting under the gingham Table cloth. Surrounded by ...