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Re: LAPIS :Chapter 10:
That does make more sense~ Aaah gotcha. I thought it had something to do with the Law because COBALT mentions it in the prior sentence. Still, I'm curious to see ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 9:
I figured I can start reviewing these as I go (its snakes-on-a-plane, lol). So far I really like where the story's going. We've already talked about the parallels, unintentional and ...
Aug 21, 2016 -
Re: Artifice of the Beast
Thank you! It's definitely a different style for me, I usually go overboard with prose so I'm glad I managed to keep it simple. ooh, good point, I'll go change ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Artifice of the Beast
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story. And for sure, who doesn't want the ability to turn into a dragon??
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Artifice of the Beast
Thank you! It wasn't totally an original thought, I got it from a prompt but I hope I did it justice. Yes the ending was kind of shoehorned in, I ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Artifice of the Beast
Yesss thanks to tumblr for the prompt haha Thanks! That was really what I was going for, it was a challenge from my normal writing voice Noted, I'll go change ...
Jul 29, 2014
