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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Without Thought.

    @dante93 thank you! Much appreciated :)

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Without Thought.

    Thanks very much! I understand what you mean about the detail. It is a little vague. Specificity is something I need to work on. Thanks again :)

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Without Thought.

    @Kafkaescence, thanks for the criticism and I've definitely taken into account what you've said. I was considering some of the points you raised already but I was unsure. Thanks for ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Without Thought.

    Thank you so much! It's really encouraging to hear something like that because I've never thought I have any ability to write anything worth reading. I posted this on the ...

    Feb 19, 2011


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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