singingsaturdays

Hey, very well done, I have to say. But it seemed more like a story you were too lazy to write, therefore made into a poem. As for your opening ...

Worrying about the ‘should haves’ and ‘ifs’ is like saying please. I really liked this line. In a way it summarized the entire piece, and can make the reader's train ...

Repetition at the beginning of the line is good, and helps the flow and pattern of a poem, but over-using it makes you sound like you can't use your creativity ...

How long has it been now? Two weeks? Why doesn't it move, or leave? It's good to add questioning to a poem, especially when there's a twist at the end, ...

Chained Chained to the fear that has kept you in the same spot for so long Chained to the grudges that has kept your relationship from growing Chained to the ...