singdawg

Alright so, I think that this is a well written poem about , I like how you have shown progression of age through the stanzas too. I like the message, ...

'It was a hot early summer morning" hot and early or it was early on a hot summer morning "when i left my house for what would be the most ...

"Luke Verigo was a rich kid." alright, introduction to the protagonist right off the bat is a good idea. " "A usual, pampered and spoiled rich kid." I think usual ...