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Hello again. You're the best. I reread these a hundred times, and even with Grammarly, still missed a period. That may trump all the nice words prior to your find. ...

Hi Kaia. Thanks for all the great feedback. I'll get rid of chapter at the start, it is just confusing. It's part of a collection of short stories I wrote, ...

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Hello SilverNight. Round 2. “Just let me know if you need somewhere to go because you burned your place down.” Clarity grinned, swirling the contents of her glass. “It’s always ...

Hello Shady. Thank you for your review. Despite rereading this story over and over, I still missed little things, so I appreciate the assist in helping me catch my errors. ...

Hello Kate. Thanks for taking the time to read my work. I absolutely love your reviewing style. Reliving my story with your feedback helped me see the story through another ...

Hey, thank you for taking the time to read my work. I loved everything you said, the good and bad, as it gave me the feeling that you understood what ...

Thank you for your extensive and valuable review. I have taken a lot of notes from your critique and am grateful that you would even take the time to flip ...

I like how you compared the abandoned carnival to the main characters feeling of abandonment. Great spot for Maybelline to interrupt. Points for a happy ending, even a horrifying one. ...