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Re: As if I was in Love Chp 3 (edited)
Wow. This is really good. I agree with everyone about the flashback, it shows you how this first started and why her mother and the girl had a fight. One ...
Nov 29, 2008 -
Re: As if I was in Love Chp 2 (edited)
I paused for a second and reconsidered my options, “Fine. Let’s go.” I said opening, and walking out the door. what are the optionss??? i wanna know(: anyway, i couldn't ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Marked
“Why not,” He asked question mark there. “I’m staying.” Brian said firmly. I think that would need an exclamation mark instead of a period. “My temper is hard to control ...
Sep 11, 2008
