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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: As if I was in Love Chp 3 (edited)

    Wow. This is really good. I agree with everyone about the flashback, it shows you how this first started and why her mother and the girl had a fight. One ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: As if I was in Love Chp 2 (edited)

    I paused for a second and reconsidered my options, “Fine. Let’s go.” I said opening, and walking out the door. what are the optionss??? i wanna know(: anyway, i couldn't ...

    Oct 27, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Marked

    “Why not,” He asked question mark there. “I’m staying.” Brian said firmly. I think that would need an exclamation mark instead of a period. “My temper is hard to control ...

    Sep 11, 2008


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