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Fittingly, the thing I enjoyed most about this was Lorelei herself. She comes across as competent & slightly mischievous, which makes her engaging to follow. The many small details help ...

The first thing that caught my eye was the diary-style narration, which works well for the character of Luna. It makes her relatable & establishes her age (12) effectively. It ...

First of all, I enjoyed most the shift from slice-of-life to an apocalypse! I found that the the commute scene was great functionally as both literal movement & thematic setup ...

This is a beautiful start! Your prose has a real oral-storytelling quality that feels incredibly memorable! I really dig the "geological" personality you give the landscape. The opening image of ...

This is a fascinating dive into a sci-fi world with a really dark, psychological edge. I love the concept of a child being forced to study "useful" brain science only ...

1. I really dig the vibe of this Null character & the whole contract setup; it’s a total hook. It works well as an introductory scene because it immediately complicates ...