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Re: A nice joke speech!
It seems too goofy to be funny, but not totally goofy enough to be funny because it isn't funny. You get me? Dieeee!!! Lol joking, yeah I hear you man.
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: It's Funny, Sometimes
-insert review here- There you go, since you don't want me to review.
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: A nice joke speech!
LAWL! Thank you nate! =]] And eve liked mah everyone =] Hehe I am so glod you liked mah jokeeee. =]
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Dirty Fashion
You made me smile... I like the musical rhyme to this. I defently liked this poem too. Meh, I got no real review. Sorry for being lazy. Good luck. Keep ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Poem(s)?
All the bewildered. All the bewildered, isolated, enigmatic, solutions vary. Questions differ. Like shades of light bending from Red to Yellow, from Blue to violet. The day darkening with consequentia
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Poem(s)?
For haiti, eh? The earth quaked and buildings shook. Homes dropped to their knees, praying to god. That their lives aren't gone their families aren't dead. But now, they roam ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Poem(s)?
Nurturing parents Days settle and rains come; washing and singing a mother-like tune. Saying softly underneath her breathe "Everything will be alright". Tapping and dancing the sun to life. Shining ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Tremors (For Haiti) - Edit
You're making me want to post mine. Haha. And nice, I see you kept some lines, well most from the other poem you let me read. (Is this the same ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Emerald Eyes
I don't like how it's jagged like in the poem, not the greatest of structure. Also your imagery is nice and I do like where it takes us. So good ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Poem(s)?
My own walk. Muscles damaged, limping to a stand, a nice shooting pain runs though my leg. For I cannot walk- normally, that is. My movements slow, precise, uneasy. Uncertain. ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Two Gay Poems
Just 2 men? What about 2 woman? It should be for everyone lol. And it's okay. No review is nessesary. *thumbs up*
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Leather Shoes
this is awesomely awesome truly awesome!
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Ode to Sunday Pancakes
Haha, I like the twist at the end, I really enjoyed it. And the rhythem seems okay to me. Also I did like how you built up to an "OMG ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: my curse
When a mod drops by, Lock this please.
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Sturdy Tree
You should review a bit more before posting...Please. 3:1 is a good ratio.
Dec 5, 2009
