silented1

i don't know what i liked and disliked about this...the tick tock repetition annoyed the hell out of me...sorry.. i guess... it seemed usless at parts... where it didn't connect ...

ehh...its just of shadows flickering from a candle or something ? sounds like a nice little place....for a bit.. i'd love to see this poems ideas and or images worked ...

ehh i know despare.. depression and pain very.. well.. i suppose.. ehhhh -sratches head- why is that claw thing ripping your heart ? how it is affecting you ? or ...

it must be nice.. to have someone like that in your life .. no ? .. it'd be cool maybe if you expanded on why you loved them ?...not as ...

on behalf of the guys... sort of... the only ones that are really like that are the ones that are shallow and stupid...and insecure and what not.....and i know whats ...