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Re: Prologue
This is really cool story line. and the characters are so well described i noticed a couple spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes but all in all its a good story ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: The Mortal Door Ch 1 (revised)
This is story is pretty cool i did spot a couple of spelling mistakes and some puncuation mistakes but i like the lay out of the story and the plot ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Libraeon 4
This is story is pretty cool i did spot a couple of spelling mistakes and some puncuation mistakes but i like the lay out of the story and the plot ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Princess Aaron
This is story is pretty cool i did spot a couple of spelling mistakes and some puncuation mistakes but i like the lay out of the story and the plot ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Game On (Level 3)
This is story is pretty cool i did spot a couple of spelling mistakes and some puncuation mistakes but i like the lay out of the story and the plot ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Legacy Chapter Six
This is a really great story i like this a lot the characters are so well detailed i like the main character the story is very understandable. i hope to ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: The Stranger (Chapters 7-9)
This is a really great story i like this a lot the characters are so well detailed i like the main character the story is very understandable. i hope to ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Tèa
This is a really great story i like this a lot the characters are so well detailed i like the main character the story is very understandable. i hope to ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: The Logs Of Jeremy Edwards Ch.3 (outdated)
This is a really great story i like this a lot the characters are so well detailed i like the main character the story is very understandable. i hope to ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Missing in action
I found this really close to heart i love your work especially this poem please keep writing it i think people would love it but the problem is i wish ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 3)
This is an amazing story the punchline in great and your characters are so well described and detailed i would love to see more of your work please keep writing ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Ch 12: The Return of Love
This is an amazing story the punchline in great and your characters are so well described and detailed i would love to see more of your work please keep writing ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 3
This is an amazing story the punchline in great and your characters are so well described and detailed i would love to see more of your work please keep writing ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The Inbetween: Prologue
This is amazing i love the punchline and the characters are so well detailed in your writing i would love to see more of this story please keep writing it ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The Nation's Slaughterhouse preface
This is amazing i love the punchline and the characters are so well detailed in your writing i would love to see more of this story please keep writing it ...
Aug 19, 2011