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Re: Mob Princess Preface
Wow! That was really good. I am curious to know what Rowan and Emmet did. I will have to read more when it comes. She could hear ruffling of papers ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Black Snow
I happen to love dogs and dog stories, so when I saw this one, I couldn't help but read it. Here is what I found (below), but other wise this ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: First chance at Forever
I like the title and how you started this story. You did a good job in describing the scene. I think you could use a little more description when you ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: Chapter One- Unknown
You did a very good job with this story. I don't read a lot of stories set in present time so when I saw your story I wasn't sure if ...
Jun 1, 2008