shiney1

Guys, remember that there is a debate forum. She seems to already have her mind made up and answered the dislikes. Plus many people do on fact like this poem, ...

I understand this piece pretty well. It is not so confusing that you don't get the main idea that is trying to be portrayed. I would like to know why ...

That was very nice, and had great description, which I love. Painted a good picture of what was going on physically and psychologically. Neat!

Very nice and deep! Full of great description and emotion. Just practice spelling out words instead of using contractions, it helps the flow and the mood. Great work!