shieldmaiden

Hi Anma. I really love this story. It's concept is so compelling and so touching. You had a grasp on my heart the first time it was mentioned how the ...

Love this FlamingPhoenix! I only spotted a few grammar mistakes. You used 'know' instead of 'no' frequently throughout this work. Near the end you used Nukas' name instead of Ndutu ...

Thanks FlamingPhoenix! I'm really glad you reviewed this work - your reviews help so much! I'm glad that you pointed out those mistakes. And thanks for your encouragement. I'm glad ...

Aw, thanks.

Why - hello :)

Thanks for the great review! I really like your tip about description. I really struggle with that a lot and keeping in mind about the senses will surely help me ...

Oh, thanks I didn't catch those grammar errors. And also thanks for the tip about fixing my title. I'm really new to this and want to make it easier for ...

Thanks - glad you like it. It means a lot that you found it interesting. Thanks for being so encouraging.

Thanks Honora - I will include more description when I edit it again. Thanks for the great, and as always, very helpful input!

So beautiful. There is really nothing to say. I think that it was perfect - I nearly started crying. Please keep writing pieces like these.

Thanks. I hope that my next two chapters help clarify up a few things and that you are able to get a better idea of what the setting is. I ...

Thanks so much for the review. Hopefully, my next chapter clarifies why the prince is asking for directions.

Thanks so much for the review and the great advice. It really helps and I found it very encouraging!

Hey Honora - guess who. Since I've already read your story (or what you've written so far) I just want to say that it is fantastic. I really like the ...