-
Re: Your Brain
at first I though you may have unintentionally spelled the words wrong and used improper grammar etc. but soaking it in with a different mindframe, thinking you did that on ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: Smoking Camels on Your Grave
honestly, I am covered in goosebumps. I read this aloud to my friend and we both really took it in and wow, amazing. You really showed so much depth within ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: I hate you with all my hearts
Hey this is really good. I can almost hear it in my mind as I read. What type of instrumentals do you see in accordance here? Are you interested in ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Are They Listening?
Good use of rhyme here. I really like when such emotion is combined with rhyming rather than just free verse. Unbelievable that you can feel and expose so much at ...
Aug 6, 2008
