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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Ballad of Captain Irene - Chapter 1

    Okay. This is Magicpunk, an unofficial genre of fantasy that takes place in a world that has everything we would have today. On the first platform that it's on, I ...

    Apr 30, 2020
  • Script » Historical Fiction, Theatre Re: Wilhelm's Rose - Scene 1: Introduction

    Yeah, some of the dialogue can come off as a bit modern. I edited this scene from a play I co-wrote with a playwright group; based on the fact that ...

    Apr 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Who

    Okay, so this poem was written maybe two years ago. I was inspired by the format of a poem about two different girls; one about the life of a girl ...

    Apr 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: The sound of the moonlight

    I liked the free verse. It's grammatically correct, and I enjoyed the simple but beautiful imagery. It has a whimsy to it. I like that. The rhyme scheme is a ...

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Ballad of Captain Irene - Chapter 1

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    Apr 22, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Mon Amour (Part I)

    I love how you described this. This accurately portrays the tone of a romantic era personality, and it's a good diary-esque entry to the story. You're a good writer, and ...

    Apr 22, 2020


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