shayspeare

This poem is enjoyable. It's short, snappy. The rhymes, I noticed are excellent. They're masculine and just make sense. I like the first word of most lines are masculine rhymes. ...

I love how you wrote this poem. I could feel the anger burning in this poem. It portrays Eliza's emotions from this song perfectly. So, I congratulate you on this ...

I love this poem. It has that sad tone, and it's beautiful. I can see that you did very much free-verse as rhythm doesn't play a part in how you ...

I love how you described this. This accurately portrays the tone of a romantic era personality, and it's a good diary-esque entry to the story. You're a good writer, and ...