shagy91

Thx Anas for your comment, the forgotten "I" was corrected, but the advanced part I may not agree with you because the reader doesn't have to get the same picture ...

Very deep but very obvious! The thing is that you need to give imagery for your feelings, don't just right it straight forward, metaphors and symbolic entities would be great ...

I saw nothing but a brilliant image of a life time, When i read those wonderful words... I could just draw pictures or even animate it for a movie!