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loved everything but the racism one. . . . ^^ Vote Sureal, as he is So Real about our wants and need of our nation! Hoo-ha!

*laughs* Another absolutely crazy story! What do you eat before you go to sleep!?!?!? Thanks for a laugh! Cheers. - jai -

*post taken by the same things that steal all my right socks*

Hey! fiver: . . . *guilty* yeah. It was a predictable outcome - I was going to have the vet eat it himself or something, raw, "Dr. Stevenson raised the ...

Hey! First of all, the second revision is MUCH MUCH MUCH better than the first! ^^ 2) My first critique was a bit harsh - sorry for that ^^" 3) ...

ok. *winces* harsh and maddening. I see your point as regards to the descriptions, but I was aiming for a Richard Laymonesque writing, not actual, full blown, JRR Tolkien over ...

*laughs* yuck! this is great! disgusting, but great! *curious* did this happen to a "friend of a friend"? the beginning sucked me in immediately, and the rest was just as ...

hey hint - this is too long. if you break it up into parts (example: part 1 of chapter 1), people will be more inclined to read it and critique ...

Awesome story! Please continue with it. I'm just hoping Repunzel isn't the REAL Repunzel, otherwise that'd be totally out of whack. Hoping to read more! jai

Why would he kiss her before he set her on fire? Why didn't she just get out of the fire? Why did he have to kill her at all? What ...

Hey guys! Thanks for all the imput! Kyle: lolz - ur reaction is priceless. Chocoholic: thankyou - I'm glad you enjoyed it Saint Razorblade: thanks for welcoming me! and for ...

hey thanks! yeah. . . mice. . . coz of the "squeak, squeak" right? well. . . thanks for reading it! cheers! jai

hey! i liked this - pretty cool, and you ended it on a nice cliffhanger! i'm off to read the second part that i saw lurking in ur gallery. congratulations ...

kokobeans: thanks for such a positive review! - yeah the boy's name is jarred. thanks for the "never'd" suggestion - sometimes i get lazy writing, and add nonreal words. mischiefmaker: ...

Rodax perked up. It was his daughter, then, was it? The blonde from the pictures? Well this was interesting... --- NICE USE OF LANGUAGE He felt a rising tide of ...