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Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
Woooo, huuge chapter :P But I can't complain - I mean, look at Reprisal :P Anyway, on to the review :) Community service... They were kidding, right? Cleaning up a ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Kiss of Death: Chapter Two (Part 1)
Hey Tiger, half of the Dynamic Duo here to review :) I swear Azrael will come around eventually, but she's about nineteen reviews behind :3 Anyway, on to the review! ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Freya's Replacement (Episode 1)
Hi :) Wow, you've got a whole lot of reviews on this already, so I apologise if I repeat what anyone else has said (I haven't read over the other ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
Hiya Skins :3 Here to review! Damn, I was hoping to review within an hour of the request, like last time, but your chapter is a little big to allow ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: The Last Day
This is my entry for a school short story competition on bullying. And I think the first work of mine I've decided to rate 16. Is your story allowed to ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Pain Killers
This is the story how Alec and Jane became vampires, how they got involved with the volturii and so on... this were just something to begin with i was going ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Salem [Chapter Three]
Hi Apple! Jai here from the Dynamic Duo (or the Dysfunctional Duo until the other half finishes her exams :/)! Also, sorry for my late review. I burned my pinkie ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Possible Book Proulouge for what i am writing
Hi Mark :) Before I begin, here's something I tell all users I come across who have committed the same crime (:P): When you look at wall of text like ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
Hi, Jai here to review, as requested. Now Jash, already most of the best reviewers on this site have reviewed your work, and I can see that a lot of ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: P.S. I Hate You(Contest entry)
Hi Shubhi, I hope I didn't get to this that late :/ I only just got on. Here to review as requested! :D I stole a glance at Peter, his ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: The Way Of The Jungle (chapter three, read chapter 1)
Hi there, very clever username :P I only realised after I tried saying it aloud. I'll have to remember that one. Unless of course you couldn't spell "pseudonym". On to ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Pain Killers
Hiya Demoness. Some quick suggestions before I start my review: 1) (this is something I tell many new YWS users) First, when you look at wall of text like that, ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter one (Rewriten)
Hi Stealth :) Some quick pointers before I start my actual review: 1) Try placing your Author's Notes in spoilers so that they don't detract from the actual story 2) ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: I Slept Alone
Hi Nightshade. I recently watched Requiem, a German film with English subtitles and it was so bad it depressed me. So if my review is harsh, please forgive me. Light ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: To Die Young
Hi Snickers. This is a really touching topic and poem you've decided to share with us at YWS. I think you'll find no one has reviewed because no one wants ...
Nov 15, 2010
