secretemogirl21

Hey Great poem keep it up. I think it may need one or two more lines to finish it up. But that's basically all so keep it up. Also hope ...

hey a few things that could improve your work would be: 1. To make the poem flow ( you have almost got it but it needs to be improved) 2. ...

This is a really good poem. I love how you have put the words together. But to me it needs extra. Maybe another line or two