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Re: Push-Up
Oh, it was about popcycles!
Dec 18, 2007 -
Re: Push-Up
That is because it is a Cinquain poem. Duh! It makes since to me!
Dec 18, 2007 -
Re: Imperfect World
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I liked the part that you talked about dreaming about making a change yet, never getting around to doing so. I have a saying. ...
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: Daggers of Salt
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love how you used the symbolism for the salt. Everyone knows that salt dries up snails and burns when it is poured ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Are You Alone In This World?
I liked everything about this poem. I could tell it came from your heart and that is the best way to write anything.
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Dreams
Personally, I find this poem to be one of the best haikus I have read in a while.
Nov 6, 2007