scribblingquill

Despite not watching this show, or knowing any of the characters well, a guilty part of me enjoyed this a lot...

Thanks for the crit Jon =3 I'll reply to a couple of things here... -didn't notice about the misspelling there, will change it ^_^ - Though I understand your point ...

disturbing, yet lovely, everything i look for in a poem ^_^

Ok, am rly confused with this. I know it's probably because I can't understand :~ But I LOVED the imagery in this poem, at the start you said "Inside this ...

I love this. think the reviewer above me said everything really, though I don't really understand the ending that is likely laziness on my part. I love the imagery at ...

flickers of familiarity

Haha wow I really was being obscure! Actually its about veganism... the "where's my baby?" stanza is from the point of view of a mother cow, and yes there are ...

The way you make it feel like a first person camera almost is amazing. Its all been said up there ^ but I love this!

Wow! that was brilliant. Seriously impressed. So short, but you get such a great feel of the characters. Funny as hell too. Man. Wish i could write like you. thats ...

There isn't much more to add. I didn't want this to be a long poem. If you look carefully, and think about each line then it should make sense. If ...

unless you want a rhyme scheme to have a specific purpose in your poem it doesnt need to have one at all, most poems don't rhyme and i think its ...

This is lovely. I'm afraid I'm too lazy to crit much, but there isn't much to change, its pretty much great the way it is. Very nice last line, and ...

Yeah this is kind of stuffed to the brim with different stuff because i didn't have a specific topic while writing it, just really everything that was happening to me ...

This is exactly my views on life myself. The point of life is, to live. Its so blindingly obvious.

I think I am a little in love with you