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Re: My Dad
I like the end dialogue. And the bit about people beingon at you to get a job is totally true! My mum moans at me all the time about it, ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Difference
O.o I think I really liked this. Though I don't understand it. Also I got confused cause it seems to be about monsters or vampires or something and then with ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: Between Two Worlds
I'm jealous of your title because it would be perfect for a piece of mine...damn you.... ...but yes. Its great writing. So I guess I can't stay mad. :D
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: the unknown
You are the house aren't you? Its discovering yourself? has anyone read that part In the Amber splyglass where lyra is described as a house, lights coming on and dorrs ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: These Words
I agree if you want it to be a good piece of literature then you have to do what those people up at the top encourage. But I can tell ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: An Evening Lullaby
I really really like this. All the imagery is so soft and delicate, the lace cradle, the feeling of a whole life being ahead. Its great. And the repetition of ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: I'm a burden
I really like this, especially the line You’ll need me when I’m gone, even if you’ll never want me. I feel like I would understand it better if i tried ...
Feb 23, 2008
