scissorquiz

it would have been much more effective if you had only used the first stanza. the title indicates that it is a riddle, you don't need a couple dozen lines ...

throughout, all i could think of was "ITS LIKE RAAAY-EEE-AAAIN ON YER WEDDING DAY," haha some of the images were good, but like the above poster said, cut the 4th ...

you're really not talking about much in the way of musical evolution, you're discussing radio trend evolution. of course the stuff on the radio is terrible, it's all a product. ...

i would have liked it better if instead of closing it with the idea that you want to hear the person you are speaking to say 'die', you had wanted ...