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thanks, i fixed the grammar miskates. you know, I knew that I'm mistaken, but I wrote it like that because it just fit it quite good rhithemly. But I guess ...

So much meaning in such a short poem. There is some few topics whose better not to broaden about it. Good job!

Very well written poem, very deep. Only someone who've gone through this feelings can write like that. I love you poem, I'm sure it's about true feelings, and this is ...

Nice work. This is the second chapter I read from this novel, and I think it's great. You've increased the tense just by remainding new names. I can't wait to ...

thanks, I'm glad you understand the message. In any case, this is not a poem or a story or something like that, it's a philosophical outlook on life, so it ...

Wow, great song (it is a song, right? is it meant to be tuned?) I can almost hear the music in my head. the chorus is greatly rhytemed, if you ...