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Hey Zoorah12!!! I'll be your reviewer for the day!! Let's see what you've got! The first chapter of my working novel. I know that it does not reflect the title ...

Hi Teardrop on fire! Welcome to YWS! I'll be your reviewer for the day! This is a small part of writing I need feedback on for form and wording (if ...

Hey Pandapez!!! Welcome to YWS! Let's see what you've got! Swords clashed, sending sparks cascading through the night air as battle cries peeled out like broken bells from every corner ...

Hey Ashley! Here to review draft two! Chapter One: One year previous… “…Back to the street, back to the place Back to the room where it all began Back to ...

Hi ChernobyllyInclined! I'll be your reviewer today! let's do this thing! It's horribly short, but I felt like asking you to wonder if I had any potential. I already have, ...

Hey Again Fellow! Let's see how this story continues! All reviews, critics (ofc) are welcomed. Enjoy Chapter 1 - Pure blood part 2 “Fear the light `cause it can blind ...

Ok... This is my first vampire story. I need all the help i can get. Cheers. - Thanks Firestalker! - Thanks Lord Anzius! Chapter 1 - Pure blood - EDITED ...

Hey Anti-pop! Here is my review as promised! Let's see what you've got! “Get out.” “What?” “You heard me. Get out.” “Maddie, please—” “Don’t." John tried to open the door ...

Wicked (Witch and Curse) by Nancy Holder and Debbie Vigue was definitley one of the worst books I've attempted to read (I put it down after page 167). It sounds ...

Hey Black star! I'm scasha and I'll be ripping up your piece, I mean reviewing your piece today! Let's see what you've got! PROLOUGE Hi, I'm not too sure about ...

Hey Kaylyn! Let's see what you've got! Raiyne sprinted through the city. Whitewasher towers and high rises loomed over [s]them[/s] her , blocking the sky You've only introduced one character ...

Hey Stori! I think this is the story you were talking about, right? Anyway, here goes! A/N: in this version, Aiden doesn't suffer an attack when he's out with Sal. ...

Hey sofi! The title caught my attention so I decided to review! Let's see what you have! [s]It’s supposed to be a bright day, the day she arrives back at ...

Hey! Here's my review as promised! Sorry if it sounds harsh, I just want to help you become a better writer! Let's do this thing! Veni Vidi Vici [s] I ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! It’s a rule in the forums here that you are supposed to do two reviews before you post anything, but I’m feeling nice, so I’ll ...