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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Humor Re: Untitled Novel-Prologue and Chapters 1-2

    Haha no problem! Thanks for the review!

    Nov 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Humor Re: Untitled Novel-Prologue and Chapters 1-2

    This is a novel not a poem...but thank you! :)

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dispossession

    The way you just described it is EXACTLY what I wanted it to come off across. THANK YOU!

    Nov 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dispossession

    Thank you very much for catching those two places where I repeated. That escaped my eye! And please do tell your interpretation of my piece, I am so interested to ...

    Nov 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Feed the Fire

    Hi Rishabh, I think you are clearly misunderstanding the concept of poetry. Also, I noticed you have a plethora of grammatical errors in your reviews, which I find puzzling. This ...

    Nov 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Carrier

    Thank you!

    Nov 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Feed the Fire

    This actually quite marvelous. I basically have nothing to review... I give this poem a 10/10, Fantastic. It's usually so hard to do well on a short poem. What's your ...

    Nov 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dispossession

    Thank you! It means so much!!!

    Nov 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dispossession

    Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so!!!

    Nov 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: 4 a.m.

    Autocorrect error! I meant to put "I appreciate" not "I express"..what was my computer thinking...

    Nov 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Carrier

    Thank you. This is a comment for everyone who reads this: I was just wondering if anyone got how in the last stanza, I meant for the character to turn ...

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Carrier

    Thanks for the review! Yes those are a few typos, I'll be fixing them after I start to procrastinate during one of my study sessions! Thanks again!

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Carrier

    I did do that, and it seems to be a solution. Although, I'd prefer the text to not be in the center. Oh well, thank you for your help!

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Narrative Re: my home is not a unit

    I see that now! Good job!

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Carrier

    YWS KEEPS CHANGING MY FORMATTING! There are supposed to be spaces after every period in order to divide it into stanzas. Anyone know how to fix this??

    Nov 2, 2013


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