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Re: The Fatalities In My Family Chapter Two: Gloriana
Hey, I have a review for you! "I can hardly breathe. Kill? I have never killed anyone, how come I have to be the one. As much as I want ...
Mon Nov 29, 2021 4:23 pm -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 1.2
Hey, I have another review for you! The trio made their way out through the dilapidated doorway and towards the main hallway that would take them to the central hub ...
Sat Nov 13, 2021 12:20 am -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 1.1
Hey, I have a review for you! First, I really like the descriptions you used! It does a great job of putting you into the scene and helping you feel ...
Sat Nov 13, 2021 12:10 am -
Re: Card Academy: Queen of Swords: Chapter 1
Hey, I have a review for your story! First off, I really like the way you started off the story. "I step out of the cafeteria and gasp. No way! ...
Fri Nov 12, 2021 4:02 pm -
Re: The Piling Of Bodies: Prologue
"I feel my stomach tighten, not from hunger, but from worry. The crops had failed this year. Meaning that if we don't figure something out, we're in for a rough ...
Fri Nov 12, 2021 3:33 pm -
Re: The Fatalities In My Family Prologue:
I have been doing this for two years. Filming murders and photographing bodies. It's not an ideal job but several people pay me a very high amount for this. The ...
Fri Nov 05, 2021 2:53 pm