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OOOH!! i like the ending 'A fight to the death' it makes more tension for the next, i love it!

Wow, keep it up, these are really good! i cant believe i havnt found it in a bookstore yet!! you should try to get it published!

Wow, nice beginning, and, just like Shadowsun said, mercanaries with wings, an awsome new idea! im glad you kept going with it!

this is really good, you should really keep going with it. Just work on the ending, it was kinda qwick, but keep up the good work!!! it was awsome!

THat was suprisingly good, not that your not good, i wouldnt know, but that was quite an amazingly good story. Are you going to continue with it? was that the ...