sarahmward16

I have updated it. I also got a 100 on my portfolio. It was only for a "proof of submission" type of thing. If you'd like, you can reread it ...

It has now been updated, if you'd like, you can come back to reread it. :)

It has been updated, if you would like to reread it :)

Thank you! It did help. I had the song lyrics italicized, but I don't know what happened. When I had written the part that he played a joke as if ...

It was intentional at first, but now I see it's very long, and I'll come back soon to fix it.

There is more, but it's incomplete. The story itself comes from a song, which I enjoyed listening to because I connected to it.

It actually is the beginning of an old work I wrote a few months ago. Would you like to see what I had?