sandayselkie

Great begining. Love the story line. The whole thing of being dead yet not suppose to be. I got a bit lost with the whole golden book and code of ...

Wow. An interesting story. It is a fantastic plotline already developing. Leaves you interested in what will happen next. How will the mother react? Will the sweepers come to see ...

Really good. Started with a bang, ended on a bang. It leaves you wondering what happened. Did she just lose her memory or what? Do her adoptive parents actually know? ...

I really like this. I was confused at one point at the beginning with Zayn. Was all those events in order or did you go backwards and forwards in time. ...

I really like this story. You have a great easy going mood to it. I think the best bit is Jots almost sarcastic annoying manner. Keeps the story light hearted ...

Nice. You really piqued peoples interest with the noticing of the egg. As stated before, it leaves a lot of questions. What is an epsilon? Who is the man? What ...

Positively Brilliant. Will there be a continuation? I so wish Dandy could have gone with Anthony. Will he come back for her? Great description, great plot line and great hint ...

What happened to chapters 6 and 7. The fact they were missing threw me entirely but you soon had me back on track. I am loving it. The way yo ...

I had my suspicions that the deputy was the wolf, but the way you described it still had me surprised. You described her reactions really well in my idea. The ...

really good story, Have me keen to find out what happens next. The whole thing of her trying to set of the traps only to get stuck in one. Then ...

An interesting and slightly weird story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. An interesting plot and inn some ways freaky. In some ways, there are seven kids each having to face their ...

Good story. Really enjoyed it. Starts of fairly calm until you meet the vampires. You don't explain much about what happened to her parents. It might be an idea to ...

This story is great. I really enjoyed it. It showed how much we see set things in a set way. Instead of the usually thing of dragons being uncaring and ...

This is really good. I love the way you write it how any teenager would see it. With that whole "thats just typical" attitude. I also like the way you ...