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Yeah, I understand! I'm glad you said something about it because it's a good thing to keep in mind if I want to publish work in the future!

Thanks!

Thank you! The whole "having a spare in second" sentence might be a language miscommunication... Where I am from, we always refer to second as being the second period of ...

Thanks so much! Yeah, this chapter was very small and there wasn't much added to the plot... but I'm getting there!

Well, I think it is still okay. I just wanted to mention it, since I stumbled on it a little, but even Shakespeare had troubles with rhythm. I think the ...

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Oopsie! Forgot to write [/quote] after that last one...

Oh okay! Thank you!

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Thank you so much! I believe "bit" was supposed to be "boy." Oops. I'm glad you liked the imagery and the "mind you" bit! I was hoping to spark that ...

Thank you! I knew that this chapter and the next few were lacking detail, but I thought I'd publish them before hand. Thank you so much for the review! Also, ...

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