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I ,personally, think that this is an extremely powerful and profound piece of poetry and I really like it. You have handles the serious topic amazingly well and written a ...

Wow i reaallly lliikkee this concept and i like the ending with the Biblical quotation and all that its overalll a reallly nice story and an amazing, wonderful readd thaat ...

i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much only i don't really get it at the end

Oh. My. God. I love this, it's amazing! You have captured my feelings and the feelings of many others when frightened and portrayed with such poetic finesse and structure that ...

This is great! I really like the concept of this. Also, the structure of this is amazing. The ending could be a bit more impactful, though.

Hey, I wrote something like this yesterday in the same section, titled "That's you Mum." I like this one better, but check mine out and lemme kno what you think. ...

I'm really sorry to hear that and I hope this piece can raise awareness about abuse and one day it will no longer be an issue. PS This is basically ...