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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Two Doors

    Hi there! This is a very nice poem, but don't you think you should add a full stop espically in the last line. I am not a very good critique ...

    May 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Cinderella

    Hi! The poem is really amazing I like the rhyme scheme in it. I'm a bad critique so I just have a long list of compliments! :D Anyways, I really ...

    May 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My angel

    Hi there! The poem you wrote is really amazing It brings out a lot of emotion. I actually almost started crying reading you can imagine how real it feels. I ...

    May 15, 2009


Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.
— G.K. Chesterton