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Re: Two Doors
Hi there! This is a very nice poem, but don't you think you should add a full stop espically in the last line. I am not a very good critique ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Cinderella
Hi! The poem is really amazing I like the rhyme scheme in it. I'm a bad critique so I just have a long list of compliments! :D Anyways, I really ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: My angel
Hi there! The poem you wrote is really amazing It brings out a lot of emotion. I actually almost started crying reading you can imagine how real it feels. I ...
May 15, 2009
