rustic_rebel

Well, this was very annoying. But, only cuz it was so short! :) I think you did a great job with building the tense scene and some anticipation. I know ...

Oh come on ! Really ?! You had to make him have one of those things in him?? That T-totally sucks. I'm really very angry now. :evil: Not really. It's ...

Hi! You are a talented writer and when I read your work it just draws me into the story, as if I'm standing right there experiencing it right along with ...

Hello. I kinda feel weird commenting on this. Your work is quite a bit better than mine so I sortof feel like the kindergartner teaching the teacher or something. So ...

First I love you're signature! My cuz quotes Forrest Gump all the time! Okay back to the review thing, sorry I get destracted quiet often. I love this story! You're ...

This was really nice. I think it could use a little work but it could totally work with a little effort in the right places. First off the MC's I'm ...

Wow, this is really good! I love how right at first the action keeps me on the edge of my seat. The story is really fast pace and leaves me ...

Hiya! I really liked the opening to your story! I am trying this new thing where I go over the three main elements of a story so here goes. 1~ ...

Okay first review, here goes. Sorry for anything I screw up. At first glance the story catches my attention span. Well done since for the most part it’s that of ...

Hey I don’t know what to say it seems they pretty much covered it. But, I disagree with one thing that has been said. I know elves are a very, ...