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Re: First Love
Im pretty sure i can relate to this poem. My first love was my a dear friend. Although when i tell people about our story, and they try to tell ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: another side (temp. title)
Hey, is this Haley? lol. if it is, its sam, and if it isnt im sorry about this. i loved it. I was on teh verge of crying, seriously. Its ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: Drive Through.
it sounds like it could be good, but you pulled a 'war of the worlds'. you jumped into the fun part too fast. I cant imagine anything in my mind. ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Running With Wolves
i really lied it! usually when i start reading stories on this website I get bored right at the start, but i really didn't with yours! i think you wrote ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Last year i decided to kill myself - a short story
okay a few things: when i read it, it felt like a had read this before. oh wait, i have. a basic boyfriend dies, girlfriend commits suicide story doesn't exactly ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: The incredible journey
i liked it, but i honestly would suggest changing the perspective of your story. if you are going to have different chapters int eh view of other characters, they should ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: London Rain
Yeah, so im new, so i dont really know what im doing. i really liked it. I find it really hard for myself to write poems that arent about falling ...
Jul 27, 2009
