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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: First Love

    Im pretty sure i can relate to this poem. My first love was my a dear friend. Although when i tell people about our story, and they try to tell ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: another side (temp. title)

    Hey, is this Haley? lol. if it is, its sam, and if it isnt im sorry about this. i loved it. I was on teh verge of crying, seriously. Its ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Drive Through.

    it sounds like it could be good, but you pulled a 'war of the worlds'. you jumped into the fun part too fast. I cant imagine anything in my mind. ...

    Sep 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Running With Wolves

    i really lied it! usually when i start reading stories on this website I get bored right at the start, but i really didn't with yours! i think you wrote ...

    Jul 30, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Last year i decided to kill myself - a short story

    okay a few things: when i read it, it felt like a had read this before. oh wait, i have. a basic boyfriend dies, girlfriend commits suicide story doesn't exactly ...

    Jul 29, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The incredible journey

    i liked it, but i honestly would suggest changing the perspective of your story. if you are going to have different chapters int eh view of other characters, they should ...

    Jul 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: London Rain

    Yeah, so im new, so i dont really know what im doing. i really liked it. I find it really hard for myself to write poems that arent about falling ...

    Jul 27, 2009


what are stories if not just vehicles for the pain of your own heart
— soundofmind