rubberduck

Hey there! Ok. Here's the review you requested! :D However, honestly speaking... I really doubt this is really considered a proper review. Nevertheless... I'll type this down. 1. All names ...

Hello! :D Ok. I read through the whole thing. Great job! Apart from a typo (or a few typos) here and there, it was fine. I don't think I spotted ...

You've officially got me hooked. I really liked this story. :) There weren't any mistakes that I could spot. (If there are mistakes, I'm using the same excuse that I ...

Welcome to YWS, NightmareMoon! Well then... Erm... You may not know this but in YWS, we must have 2 reviews for every story we post. I'm sure you weren't aware ...

My apologies for what I'm about to say/type. This chapter was full of dialouge. There wasn't any description of the school or anything. No introduction to the story. Just two ...

Haha. And I'll add one more! ^^ You've done some editing to your poem, as far as I can tell. (From the reviews I read.) Well... You did a good ...

I really liked this story. I could feel the emotion and imagine the scenes easily. I especially liked the ending. This May, I was Tall Alice in Alice in Wonderland, ...

Hey there. Well, I really liked this poem. ^^ This is my favourite line. Drifting in slumber on hospital sheeting. Great job! :D Considering that it's only your second poem... ...

Well, that was a nice story. :) I enjoyed reading it up to the end. Alright, it seems that the mistakes I spotted have been pointed out. So, I've got ...

Oh. How did I end up here? Haha. (I don't normally go to Dramatic Poetry. Your poem must've called me here.) Anyways... Nice poem. (I didn't spot any mistakes, by ...

Grammatical errors here and there. Apart from that, no other mistakes that I could see. I've always preferred straightforward stories, so your stories are my cup of tea. You also ...

Seems that all the mistakes I've spotted have been pointed out already. Ah well... Anyway, you have a way of keeping the readers interested in your story. ^^ Well done. ...

Oh. A sequel? *raises eyebrow* Interesting. Alright, I just found this so I'm going to spend some time reading the other chapters for this too. I cannot point out any ...

Hey there! Wow. I really enjoyed this story! I do pity poor Adam though. All this happened on his birthday. (But I think he sees it as a blessing in ...

Hey there. Couldn't spot any mistakes, really. C.J. Mustang has pointed out something. Well, people are maturing faster nowadays. (Well, it is true...) And so, we're more mature in thinking. ...