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Thanks for the awesome comments guys :) I promise that there's more to these characters than this. I've already got sone writing done. This was just to introduce the characters.

Bravo Bravo! Omg awww this is a sad-ish romantic story! I love it and I have no comments to make on it. Wonderful writing :) Great job! Keep on Writing ...

Thanks for the review. I will definately take it into consideration. I wrote this at like 2 in the morning and was literally about to fall asleep so I do ...

PART 3 IS NOW POSTED!!

Wow. Nice story :) I liked it. It's a good reminder of what we need to think about with books. Makes me want to read a book now XD Keep ...

hehehehe this is cute :) it made me giggle. i thought the secret was something terrible, but it wasn't. hehe good job Keep on Writing -Roxy

Woah!!! Mystery! Me likes! More more more! lol Keep on Writing -Roxy

Thanks! i will :)

Wow. The picture tied in with the poem is just perfect. Though I've never felt like this before, I can feel the pain. Beautiful, just beautiful.

I'm sorry if i offended you, i didn't mean it that way at all. And thank you for the useful advice. I'll be sure to fix it.

Lol thanks so much :) and i will take your thoughts into consideration :D I promise that i will continue to write this one :D Keep on Writing -Roxy

Whoah that's awesome!! i love love love the transition from dream to reality XD I'd like to see a continuation of this. -Roxy

PART 2 IS NOW POSTED!!!

His father forgets his bday

lmfao wow XD i got back on my account and saw 19 notifications lol. 1 was your reply and 18 were the likes for the story XD thanks a bunch ...