roon

The poem has a sort of upbeat feel to it, maybe because of the rhyming pattern and the rhythm it has, or the "should be against the law" I don't ...

I think this is fantastic, your imagination makes us run wild alongside it! The only minor flaws that I can see, which some may disagree with are the use of ...

Hi, I really like this poem I think you have a great vocabulary and poetic flair, especially for your age, a few things I would point out though: You said ...